Erin (Finished)

[erin]

Erin HayleyAnderson

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FULL NAME

[/SIZE] Erin Hayley Anderson
NICK NAMES[/color]
AGE[/color] Fifteen,December fifth nineteen-ninety seven
GENDER[/color] female
SEXUALITY[/color] Questioning
MEMBER GROUP[/color] Werecat Fledgling
CAT[/color] I am the cat
AFFINITY[/color] Water
SPECIES APPEARANCE[/color] Erin in her Werecat form,is spotted and she has deep amber eyes.
PLAY-BY[/color] Erin[/blockquote][/blockquote]

OKAY, WHY DON'T YOU TELL US A LITTLE ABOUT YOUR FABULOUS SELF?

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Erin Anderson,was a normal fifteen year old,worrying about her grades,and things of that nature,but that was all about to change. One day,while she was at Waterson High School,there was a strange girl following her,she then told her about the House of Night,that's when Erin started to feel cold. The girl named Ally,took her to the House of Night,where she thought of it as her home.Although,she loved it there,it was quite strange being around a bunch of other different kids like her.Her and Ally were becoming close,going everywhere together.

Erin,a Werecat and a Third Former,is more than ever joyed about being actually at the House of Night,among vampyres,fledglings,and other Werecats. She has many friends now,but she still doesn't seem like she fits in this huge school with the other kids and adults. She loves all of her new friends,and her classes. But,she never knew becoming a part of the House of Night was so challenging,but she had always told herself to be happy. She is a Third Former Werecat. kay?

INTERESTING. AND WHAT ABOUT YOUR FAMILY LIFE?

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Erin lives in Chicago,Illinois. She loves it there. She is a skinny,tall girl. Her hair is brown and her eyes are green and sometimes blue. She loves being hidden in the shadows.

She doesn't mind being outside even on a hot or cool night. She loves prowling through the dark. She has many friends at the House of Night. Even though she is only fifteen,she is 5'6. Her best friend is Ally.

Erin Anderson,is a Third Former and a Werecat. Although,she longs to be at home with her mother,she loves the House of Night. She is kind-hearted. Her life doesn't consist of much,her father died when she was two years old. Her mother misses her only daughter.

SO NOW IT'S A LITTLE MORE PERSONAL!

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YOUR NAME

[/color] Erin
EXPERIENCE[/color] Four years
CONTACT[/color] E-mail
CODE FROM THE RULES[/color] favorite soda
ROLEPLAY EXAMPLE[/color] Erin was sitting at a lunch booth by herself,until Ally came to sit with her. She enjoyed Ally's company. Although,Ally was a Werecat like Erin,they had differences among them both. Ally was going to be a lioness,Erin a leopard. Erin was really fond of cats,all types of felines. She wished Ally would become a leopard like her,but all cats can't be the same,after all. She had just recently,two weeks ago,been turned into a Werecat. She missed her family,occainsionally,but it was fine to miss them,but you could no longer go back to them because they were still human. She and Ally were talking of various things,how much homework they had for that night,their classes they were taking,the professors and other subjects. So far,they loved every single one of their classes. Ally was talking about her fighting class,to teach Werecats how to fight to protect themselves from any kind of danger that comes to them,of course,Ally was a Fourth Former in the House of Night. Erin would soon be a Fourth Former,but not yet,not until the next year. Then,they were on the subject of how healthy the House of Night is,and how they don't have any junk food. Erin laughed at Ally for complaining,which she always does.[/blockquote][/blockquote]
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[Admin]

One: You didn't fill out the "one line of lyrics to describe your character, no caps" area and you didn't add in a picture where it says "[IMG*][/*IMG]"

Fill in those two things.

Two: Who is you PB? Please add in a full name of you PB. Your play by may be an actress, actor, singer, someone famous, ect.

Three: On the personality. What you have is fine, however, it's stuff that's more of her history and how she feels about being in the House of Night. Please add what her personality is. Elaborate it. Is she stubborn? Sweet? Innocent? Easily Tempered? What?

Four: Third Former werecat fledglings have not yet shifted into a werecat. They won't know what their werecat type is yet.

This is from the Handbook.

The first year (third former) of the change they will not actually shift in anyway, by the beginning of their fourth former year they will have their first shift and be placed into their specific cat type
• For fourth, fifth and sixth former years, the werecats will shift each month on the moon
• Once the change is complete they will no longer have to shift with the moon and will be able to shift at their choice.

Five: On her History, add more of her history. You have plenty for where she is now but where was she before? You could add where she was born, who her parents are, how was she in human school, anything happen to her or family, where was she marked, how long she's been at Chicago's House of Night, ect.

One last note, if she has been marked for under four months she would have went straight to the House of Night. If she were marked for longer than four months she would have lived with Zain and Holly Carvator. Werecats came into the school four months ago.

Fix these things please.